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nightowl · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 5:12 pm Post subject: the host

still have quite a bit of tinkering to do on this one

removed the red text from the front

**image updated.......moved below**
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spartanstew · Valued Member Joined: 21 Feb 2006 Posts: 182

The red text on the front seems a bit out of place.

nightowl · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:00 pm Post subject:

thanks spartanstew Smile

.......wasn't to sure about it, but it was on a poster that i found.....been removed
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chefjoe · Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 11:55 pm Post subject:

Good start, material looks better than what I had to work with, hehe Very Happy

Boneapart · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 1:44 am Post subject:

Nice start nightowl... Wink

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drastija · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 2:37 am Post subject:

Excellent start!
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bobflemming · Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 9:56 am Post subject:

super front, nice start m8 Very Happy

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nonini · Resident Artist Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 1620

Nice start nightowl. Very Happy

Cheers nonini. Very Happy

nightowl · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 4:15 pm Post subject:

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nightowl · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 4:26 pm Post subject:

i think this is pretty much done now......includes a label

**see below**
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Boneapart · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 4:36 pm Post subject:

Looks done to me also... Nice work mate...
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spartanstew · Valued Member Joined: 21 Feb 2006 Posts: 182

The cover looks great, but the synopsis needs a bit of work. Most of it doesn't make much sense.

For example:

1. "they unknowingly knew..". How can you unknowingly know?
2. The second sentence probably needs a comma after "years" and the word "when" doesn't need to be there. At least that's how I interpret it after reading it several times. Even with those corrections, I still think it will be a rambling sentence (run-on).

Your best bet might be to just re-write it.

Maybe something like this:

Park Hee-bong runs a small snack bar on the banks of Seoul's Han River and lives with his two sons, one daughter and one granddaughter. One day, an unidentified mutant suddenly appears from the depths of the Han River spreading panic and death, and Gang-du's daughter is carried off by the monster and disappears. The family members are in great agony, as they have lost someone dearest to them, but as they find out she is still alive, they resolve to save her.

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nightowl · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 9:43 pm Post subject:

redid the synopsis......now it should be ready to upload Wink

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nonini · Resident Artist Joined: 22 Apr 2005 Posts: 1620

It become a nice set nightowl. Cool

Cheers nonini. Very Happy

nightowl · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 5:55 am Post subject:

thank you nonini Very Happy

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GEORGIEBOY26 · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:16 am Post subject:

lookin good Nightowl.....your improving all the time Smile

I was working on this one also, I think I wont bother now Wink

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nightowl · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:45 pm Post subject:

thank you GB Very Happy

.....would be interesting to see what yours looks like Wink

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daripper · Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 8:57 pm Post subject:

Looks really good to me. Very Happy

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nightowl · Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:00 am Post subject:

thanks daripper Smile

......they have just been upload
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Nice work Nightowl....good looking set.
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nightowl · Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:54 am Post subject: Re: Great Set

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